The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The layouts compare the
town
Islip's city centre as it is now, and future plans for its augmentation.
Overall
, it is evident that the
town
is going through various developments and amenities for its citizens.
Besides
, the
town
's main road will be
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for
pedestrians
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way only.
First,
according to
the plan,
a
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countryside is located at the north of the
town
, which will be
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changed
into
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a dual
dual
carrageway
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carriageway
.
In addition
, there are two shops
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the two sides of the main road. The upper one is going to be removed because of
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constructing
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some
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amenities
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such
as a bus station, a shopping mall and a car park from left to right respectively.
Also
, new housing will be constructed on the
north eastern
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and
south eastern
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southeastern
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corner
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of the settlement.
On the other hand
, there is a sizeable park at the
south eastern
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southeastern
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corner of the city, which will be smaller in size in the planned development. It is notable that the school remain in its prior place.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • town centre
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • commercial
  • pedestrian
  • amenities
  • refurbishment
  • green spaces
  • public transport
  • conservation
  • modernization
  • facilities
  • expansion
  • renovation
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