The maps below show the centre of a small town called (slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The layouts compare the

town

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Islip's city centre as it is now, and future plans for its augmentation.

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, it is evident that the

town

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is going through various developments and amenities for its citizens.

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, the

town

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's main road will be

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for

pedestrians

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way only.

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according to

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the plan,

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the

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countryside is located at the north of the

town

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, which will be

chenged

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changed

into

adual

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a dual

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carrageway

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carriageway

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, there are two shops

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the two sides of the main road. The upper one is going to be removed because of

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the constructing

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constructing

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some

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of some

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amenities

auch

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such

as a bus station, a shopping mall and a car park from left to right respectively.

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, new housing will be constructed on the

north eastern

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and

south eastern

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corner

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corners

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of the settlement.

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, there is a sizeable park at the

south eastern

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southeastern

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corner of the city, which will be smaller in size in the planned development. It is notable that the school remain in its prior place.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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urban planning
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museums and ar galleries shuld concentrate on local works rather than showing the culture or artworks from other countries. Agree or disagree

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