This is a part of a letter your receive from an English pen friend. Don't forget to tell me about the area you live in and what you and your friends do in your free time. Write a letter to your pen friend. Write your letter in about 100 words.

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Dear Ken, Thanks for sending me birthday wishes in your

last

letter which I just got yesterday

along with

your questions about the area I reside in and how I and my friends spend our spare time. To start with, my residential area in Amritsar is Ranjit Avenue which stone's throw away from the famous Golden Temple. The region is quite bustling and beautiful since it has been modified; based on the Western theme. Even though the hub is swarming with crowds all day long, my house street,

however

, is sometimes serene as it is a little away from it. In my neighbourhood, a massive park with swings and vibrant flowers and trees has been grown which I often visit with my best friend.

In addition

, we have a library on the outskirts of the city; how tranquil the place is, I cannot explain. I hop over there frequently as you know I am a big reader.

Nevertheless

, we, me and my friends make some plans out on weekends or whenever we are vacant. We go to the renowned mall nestled in the centre of Amritsar and enjoy our favourite food there at the eating outlets. There is quite a lot in my area to put on the paper. I really wish you to visit me and I will definitely show you around every inch of

this

stunning city. I hope to see you soon! Best wishes, Rajni

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8 paragraphs

238 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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This is a part of a letter your receive from an English pen friend. Don't forget to tell me about the area you live in and what you and your friends do in your free time. Write a letter to your pen friend. Write your letter in about 100 words.

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