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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the rates of a survey about
people
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 who bought fresh
coffee
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, bought instant
coffee
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, and went to a café for
coffee
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 or tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in
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 4 weeks, with the data measured in percentages.
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, it is evident that the proportion of
people
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 who visited a café was the highest throughout the period,
while
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 the percentage of those who bought fresh
coffee
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 was the smallest. In terms of the highest rates,
People
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 who visited a café in Melbourne stood at around 63%.
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 was followed by those who went to a café in Hobart and Sydney, with 63% and 60%, respectively.
Moreover
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, there was a slight decrease in Brisbane by 5% and Adelaide
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 10%. Regarding the other habits,
people
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 who bought instant
coffee
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 reached a
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peak
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 at around 53% in Hobart. There was not a significant gap
on
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 the proportion of
people
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 who bought instant
coffee
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, the habits accounted
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 9% different to the lowest percentages in Sydney.
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,
people
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 who bought fresh
coffee
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 had the lowest rates with 35% in Brisbane and Adelaide.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, café with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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