The chart below shows fruit sales in a supermarket for three different months after an advertising campaign to promote sales of peaches, pears and strawberries.

The chart below shows fruit sales in a supermarket for three different months after an advertising campaign to promote sales of peaches, pears and strawberries.
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The line graph below illustrates the number of sales in fruit post advertisement campaign to increase the sales of three different fruits.
Overall
, apples were the most purchased over the three months. The purchases
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peaches,pears and strawberries all increased over the time period. Cherries decreased in sales and melons remained relatively the same. Looking at the graph in more detail, apples make up the majority starting with a statistic of 28,000 kg,
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decreased slightly to 24 in May before gradually rising up again to 26. The most dramatic rise was in peaches, which started at 4 and exponentially increased to 27, 6 times the original number. Strawberries experienced a more moderate incline, with the statistics respectively being 4 to 16. Pears had a slower growth and increased from 16 to 18 over the time period. Originally, melon had double the figure of cherries in
Janurary
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January
, 8 and 4. Both products declined and in May equated to 2,000kg.
After
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, cherries continued to drop to 1, whilst the numbers for
melon
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grew to 6.
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