The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the total number of closed supermarkets and newly opened ones during a period of eight years in a country.
Overall
,
while
the sum of the closures market was high
initially
, new ones surpassed it
at the end
of the year. Both of them experienced a different trend
at the end
of the period.
To begin
with, the total number of supermarkets closed stood at approximately 85000.
This
figure was the highest recorded.
Moreover
,
this
segment plunged to just below 4000 in 2012.
Furthermore
,
this
fraction increased significantly to almost 6,000 in 2014 and plateaued from 2015 to 2017 which
then
dwindled to its lowest proportion in the final year by 3000.
By contrast
, recent shops made up just 6000 in 2011 lower than its counterpart in the same year. The figure began to fluctuate in the next two years until it plateaued to its lowest number by approximately 5,000 in 2015.
However
, the segment increased significantly in 2016 and remained almost stable in 2018.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • steady
  • decline
  • increase
  • peak
  • trough
  • magnitude
  • trend
  • surpass
  • plummet
  • annual
  • consecutive
  • closure rate
  • inception rate
  • net growth
  • commercial landscape
  • retail sector
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