The chart illustrates information on the percentage of British age group who donated for charity in 20 years from 1990 to 2010
The chart illustrates information on the percentage of British
age
group
who donated for charity in 20 years from 1990 to 2010
Generally speaking , from the age
bracket 18-25 to 36-50 , people contributed to charity have a decreasing trend compared between 1990 and 2010 , except for age
group
over 50 , which tended to increase slightly during the same period of time.
The youngest group
18-25 gave away the least to charity : 17% in 1990 and fell down 7% in 2010 . However
, the largest group
36-50 endowed the most to organizations : 42 % , then
declined 35% at the same time . Similarly
, the age
group
of 26-35 also
reduced 31% in 1990 and 24% in 2010 ( 7% off ) . By contrast
, the rate of the elder made a donation of funding soared slightly . The people 51-65 years of age
was 35% in 1990 , and rose 39% in 2010 ( increased by 4% ). The oldest group
( over 65) was 32% , then
reached to 35% for the same breath ( went up 3%).Submitted by weezel on
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