The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar chart
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
percentage
of Use synonyms
coffee
and tea buying and drinking in five Use synonyms
region
in Australia.
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regions
Overall
, in all regions, going to a café had the highest Linking Words
percentage
except in Use synonyms
Adelaide
. Use synonyms
Also
, all countries had the same pattern in using Linking Words
coffee
or tea except Use synonyms
Adelaide
.
In terms of buying fresh Use synonyms
coffee
, Melbourne and Sydney had the biggest Use synonyms
percentage
, with about 64% and 61% respectively Use synonyms
while
Brisbane and Linking Words
Adelaide
had the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
, with both nearly 35% which Use synonyms
it
is about 4% less than Hobart. In terms of buying instant Correct pronoun usage
apply
coffee
, in Brisbane and Hobart, the Use synonyms
percentage
was over 50% and the Use synonyms
percentage
of the rest of Use synonyms
cities
was under 50%. Correct article usage
the cities
Also
, Sydney was the lowest, with 46%. In Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart, over 60% of people went to a café Linking Words
while
in Brisbane and Linking Words
Adelaide
, the Use synonyms
percentage
was less, with 55% and 50% respectively.Use synonyms
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