The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar chart
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
percentage
of coffee
and tea buying and drinking in five region
in Australia.
Change to a plural noun
regions
Overall
, in all regions, going to a café had the highest percentage
except in Adelaide
. Also
, all countries had the same pattern in using coffee
or tea except Adelaide
.
In terms of buying fresh coffee
, Melbourne and Sydney had the biggest percentage
, with about 64% and 61% respectively while
Brisbane and Adelaide
had the lowest percentage
, with both nearly 35% which it
is about 4% less than Hobart. In terms of buying instant Correct pronoun usage
apply
coffee
, in Brisbane and Hobart, the percentage
was over 50% and the percentage
of the rest of cities
was under 50%. Correct article usage
the cities
Also
, Sydney was the lowest, with 46%. In Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart, over 60% of people went to a café while
in Brisbane and Adelaide
, the percentage
was less, with 55% and 50% respectively.Submitted by kk.1379 on
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