The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given map compares two different
place
which Change to a plural noun
places
is
assumed for establishing a restaurant by a company in the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
center
of Paris.
Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, the second location in
a better situation in terms of attracting people's attention rather than the first one.
Regarding Add a missing verb
is in
to
the first option in the northwest section of the city, Remove the preposition
apply
it is clear that
it is near the Maritime Museum and the Aquarium with 8000 and 2000 visitors each day respectively, and a park as well as
a bank is at
the East side of the possible place of the restaurant.
Looking at the other possible choice, it is so close to one of the most landmarks of the Change preposition
on
wolrd
, the Eiffel Tower, with just 16000 visitors each day, Correct your spelling
world
while
other tourism
places including Replace the word
tourist
Art
Gallery with 750 visitors and Correct article usage
the Art
Correct article usage
the sport
sport
center with 500 ones each day. Change the noun form
sports
Moreover
, a park and Bir-Hakeim station are placed near to
Change preposition
apply
this
possible location of the restaurant.Submitted by mahrokh.alaei on
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