The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given map compares two different
place
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places
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which
is
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are
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assumed for establishing a restaurant by a company in the
center
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centre
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of Paris.
Overall
, the second location
in
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a better situation in terms of attracting people's attention rather than the first one. Regarding
to
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the first option in the northwest section of the city,
it is clear that
it is near the Maritime Museum and the Aquarium with 8000 and 2000 visitors each day respectively, and a park
as well as
a bank is
at
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the East side of the possible place of the restaurant. Looking at the other possible choice, it is so close to one of the most landmarks of the
wolrd
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world
, the Eiffel Tower, with just 16000 visitors each day,
while
other
tourism
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places including
Art
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the Art
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Gallery with 750 visitors and
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the sport
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sport
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center with 500 ones each day.
Moreover
, a park and Bir-Hakeim station are placed near
to
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apply
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this
possible location of the restaurant.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prime location
  • pedestrian traffic
  • commercial area
  • accessibility
  • landmarks
  • tourist attractions
  • local clientele
  • dining establishment
  • culinary scene
  • footfall
  • lease terms
  • business district
  • market analysis
  • target demographic
  • urban planning
  • zoning regulations
  • competitive analysis
  • public transport links
  • patronage
  • culinary niche
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