The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a number of tourists visiting a particular carribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many people came to a particular Caribbean
Island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the
island
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's visitors went up almost steadily every year over the given period.
Moreover
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, the
number
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of visitors
stayed
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on the
island
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was always bigger than those staying on cruise ships, except in 2016 and above when it reversed. The total
number
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of visitors was exactly 1
million
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in the first year of the period before increasing gradually to around 2.75
million
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in 2015. The
number
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of
tourists
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remained the same until 2016 and rose again by approximately 0.75
million
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persons in 2017. The volume of
tourists
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staying on the
island
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stood at around 0.75
million
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from 2010 to 2011. It
then
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climbed up consistently before reaching a peak at 1.5
million
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.
Next,
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the trend experienced up and down until it came back to its plateau at 1.5
million
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. There were a fluctuating
number
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of
tourists
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staying on cruise ships between 2010 (0.25
million
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) and 2013 (0.5
million
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). After fluctuating, the volume of individuals
subsequently
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witnessed a constant climb, overtook that of staying on the
island
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in 2016 at 1.5
million
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tourists
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, and eventually reached a peak at 2
million
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tourists
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at the end
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of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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