The chart below shows tha value of one country's exports in various catagories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each catagory of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The bar chart illustrates
income
of one country's Correct article usage
the income
export
in different categories between 2015 and 2016, Fix the agreement mistake
exports
while
the tables depicts
the share of change in the same years. Change the verb form
depict
Overall
, there are not any significant increases or decrises
not Correct your spelling
decreases
include
textiles, Wrong verb form
including
although
both of
Change preposition
apply
chart
witnessed Fix the agreement mistake
charts
a
minute changes in the years.
by 2016, the amount of petroleum products was around 60 Correct article usage
apply
billions
and it seems a minimal increase in the next year, Change to singular
billion
wheteas
the number of textiles, which was around 25 billion in 2015, Correct your spelling
whereas
experienses
Correct your spelling
experienced
a
significant growth in the following year. the share of engineered goods, which was about 55% in 2015, Correct article usage
apply
grown
Wrong verb form
grew
minimaly
by 8.5% in the next year. Correct your spelling
minimally
minimal
Moreover
, the proportion of gems and jewellery, which was 40% in the
2015, saw a went up by 5.18%. Change the article
apply
Further more
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
according to
the type of goods agriucltural
products, which was around 30% in Correct your spelling
agricultural
the
2015, Change the article
apply
experiensed
a small went up by 0.18%.
Correct your spelling
experienced
To sum up
, approximately 80% of the categories saw a risen
and 20% of the whole categories peaked up moderately in Replace the word
rise
the
2016.Change the article
apply
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