Some people believe that universities should only accept students with the highest marks while others believe that some students with low marks should have an opportunity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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should have a chance.
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higher
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the person with a good
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intelligence
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should get
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of
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astronomy
department. Next, the
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. I think it's needed to identify their
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a decision. How about the
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students
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, I think
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opportunity
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to learn in the
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with
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the
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benefit
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personal
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. It might
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about involving motoric like repair something. We must take a test to know what
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the
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skill
has
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. In
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conclusion
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instrument
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describe
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of
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the student
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the student
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and
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make
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the
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come to
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higher
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match
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with
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their ability and
skill
.
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, no people suffer
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this
policy and every
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chance
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a chance
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to sit in
education
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the education
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centre.
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introduction conclusion present
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and your thesis statement. It should outline the views you will discuss.
supported main points
Develop paragraphs with clear main ideas, supported by reason and examples. Each paragraph should have a clear central topic.
logical structure
Avoid repetitive sentence structures and aim for a variety of complex grammatical structures.
complete response
Fully address all parts of the task, making sure your opinion is clear and expands on both views presented in the prompt.
relevant specific examples
Use specific examples that are directly relevant to the views discussed, to strengthen your argument and clarity.
clear comprehensive ideas
Clarify your ideas and ensure they are comprehensive and easily understood. Avoid ambiguity and be concise.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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