The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides
percentages
of current
health
expenditure
information compared to the GDP for the years 2002, 2007, and 2012 for multiple European
countries
. Generally,
countries
like Belgium, Switzerland, Spain, and Estonia spent the
health
expenditure
consistently
while
the
percentages
for other
countries
fluctuated
along
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during
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the period.
Firstly
, Switzerland was the country with the highest and
consistent
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most consistent
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percentages
of
health
expenditure
with around 11% for all
period
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periods
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.
While
Belgium and Spain allocated their
expenditure
only 10% and 8% respectively.
Whereas
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apply
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Estonia was
also
the country that
also
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apply
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spent consistent
percentages
, but the number is considerably low with only 3%. Denmark, Poland, Slovenia, and Norway were the
countries
that decreased their
expenditure
for
last
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the last
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two periods, 2007 and 2012, the number remained consistent as well.
Secondly
, there were
countries
that increased their expenses for
health
like
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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and Luxembourg. Luxembourg started the allocation with around 7% in 2002 and
then
they upgraded the number in 2007 with 8%. The Netherlands increased their allocation consistently
around
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by around
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1% annually.
However
,
the
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apply
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France was the only country with
fluctuated
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fluctuating
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numbers of
expenditure
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expenditures
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,
started
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starting
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with
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at
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9% in 2007 and
peaked
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peaking
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at
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in
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2007
then
decreased
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decreasing
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to 10%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, health, expenditure, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • expenditure
  • percentage
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • comparison
  • notable
  • pattern
  • exceptional
  • deviation
  • neighbouring countries
  • economic policies
  • public health
  • data analysis
  • statistical comparison
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