The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides
percentages
of current health
expenditure
information compared to the GDP for the years 2002, 2007, and 2012 for multiple European countries
. Generally, countries
like Belgium, Switzerland, Spain, and Estonia spent the health
expenditure
consistently while
the percentages
for other countries
fluctuated along
the period.
Change preposition
during
Firstly
, Switzerland was the country with the highest and consistent
Correct quantifier usage
most consistent
percentages
of health
expenditure
with around 11% for all period
. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
While
Belgium and Spain allocated their expenditure
only 10% and 8% respectively. Whereas
Estonia was Correct word choice
apply
also
the country that also
spent consistent Rephrase
apply
percentages
, but the number is considerably low with only 3%. Denmark, Poland, Slovenia, and Norway were the countries
that decreased their expenditure
for last
two periods, 2007 and 2012, the number remained consistent as well.
Correct article usage
the last
Secondly
, there were countries
that increased their expenses for health
like Netherlands
and Luxembourg. Luxembourg started the allocation with around 7% in 2002 and Correct article usage
the Netherlands
then
they upgraded the number in 2007 with 8%. The Netherlands increased their allocation consistently around
1% annually. Change preposition
by around
However
, the
France was the only country with Correct article usage
apply
fluctuated
numbers of Wrong verb form
fluctuating
expenditure
, Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
started
Wrong verb form
starting
with
9% in 2007 and Change preposition
at
peaked
Wrong verb form
peaking
at
2007 Change preposition
in
then
decreased
to 10%.Wrong verb form
decreasing
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