you have seen an advertisement of Australian magazines for someone to live with family in six-months and look after their six-years old child write a letter 1-Explain why you would like this 2-Give detail of why you are suitable person to employ 3-Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Mam , I am Preeti and

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have seen an

adversitement

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advertisement

in

local

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a local

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magazine for

care

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a

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taker who

stay

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stays

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with your family and

look

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looks

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after

of

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apply

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your six years

old

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apply

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child for

few

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a few

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months.

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would like to apply for

this

job

as

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am staying just next to your street and

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am really keen to get

this

job

opportunity because

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can save my travelling time and expenditure too.

i

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am the right person for

this

opportunity as

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really like kids . Earlier

i

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was working in a

kinders

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kinder

garden for

few

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a few

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years so

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had

a lots

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of experience

in

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handling kids and

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was enjoying my work. The main reason

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for

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leaving my previous

job

is relocation as my husband got

an

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good

oportunity

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opportunity

in

this

beautiful city. Apart from

child

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the child

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,

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can

also

help you

in

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other

house hold

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household

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work like bringing vegetables and

grocery

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groceries

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from the

super market

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supermarket

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, cleaning utensils ,

cleaning

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and cleaning

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and organising

house

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the house

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. Actually , I have one son and he is pursuing his graduation so he is busy

in

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his studies in

evening

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the evening

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he

had

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his football classes.Now my husband's company deploying him onsite for six months so

i

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will be free all the time.

then

i

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have

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decided and start looking for

job

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a job

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in

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with

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relevant experience . Working

some where

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is the best way to spend your spare time. Request you to please consider my application and give

an

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opportunity to work. Looking for

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a positive

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reply. Regards Preeti