The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population

in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for

2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the
percentage
of city populations in the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia, between 1970 and 2020, and
also
the forecast of the percentages until 2040.
Overall
, the population has grown in all four countries during
this
50-year period,
also
the growth will continue for the next two decades.
According to
the graph, the
percentage
of people living in cities in Malaysia had the most rise which started at 30
percent
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and ended up at around 75
percent
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in 2020, especially experienced a dramatic increase from 1990 to 2010 by about 30%;
however
, the
last
recorded decade the pace of rise were more slight and it is predicted that it will keep
this
pace of growth until 2040 and will become more than 80
percent
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.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of the total city population in the Philipines had the least growth between 1970 and 2020
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only 10%, and it is the only country that experienced a peak and a drop which were in 1990 and 2010 respectively; It is predicted that the
percentage
of people living in cities in
this
country will rise gradually in next two decades. The population of Thailand experienced a stabilisation from 1990 to 2020 but the forecast shows an increase in the future.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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