Do you believe that self-driving cars will become common in the near future? Why or why not? Support your answer with reasons and expamles from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, I do think that automatic

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will grow in the years to come and

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is because of advanced

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and

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desire to reduce

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accidents.

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with, one of the reasons why automatic

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will increase is

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advancement

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technology

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to say, research in technologies has grown to an extent that people think of creating new things that simplify

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lives as

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applies to

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too. Specialists are trying out different measures to make sure that

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to come,

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are automatically driving us as long as they are set.

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will be a matter of putting some settings to where you are going.

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research done by John at Makerere University shows that

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years to come, we shall not be driving ourselves

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we shall be having robot automobiles and

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will be

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of advanced

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, another point why there will be more self-driving

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the desire for the

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to reduce accidents.

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robots

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vehicles

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shall be able to follow the rules and regulations that the state has put in place unlike when people are driving.

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will not only reduce the number of accidents that happen because of collusion and overspending but it will

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increase our safety.

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, some of the self-driven

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which are already in service are following the regulations well,

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the governments are advertising for more

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that if the

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has become interested in them, meaning the number of self-driven

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will rise if more energy and money is invested. In conclusion, I believe that robot

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will become more popular in future

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of advanced

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and

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desires. I hope in future, the state will promote

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more self-driving

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Task Achievement

While you have expressed a clear position throughout the essay, ensure that each paragraph has a central idea and is fully elaborated upon for a more complete response to the task. Expanding on the implications and consequences of self-driving cars could provide additional depth to your arguments.

Coherence and Cohesion

Strive for a logical progression of ideas throughout your essay, making use of cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs. Work on varying these devices and structuring your paragraphs so that each one builds upon the last.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

308 words

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autonomous vehicles
artificial intelligence (AI)
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technological revolution
smart infrastructure
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