You live in a small apartment building with a parking lot in back, and you often cannot find an empty parking space when you get home from work. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • describe the situation. • explain why it bothers you. • suggest something the landlord could do to solve the problem.
Good morning
Apartment
Capitalize word
Management
management
Board,
I hope you are working well. I am Tung who own Capitalize word
Management
Apartment
No.5.
I am writing to you about a problem that I am daily facing at our residences
. Fix the agreement mistake
residence
Due to
my jobs
, I usually come home at 7PM and leave the Fix the agreement mistake
job
apartment
at 6AM. I often don't get a parking lot when I arrive my
house, All of them are being Change preposition
at my
full
used with a lot of cars, even if those are guest cars.
In Change the word
fully
additional
, there are some vehicles Replace the word
addition
which
barrier in front of my car when I leave my Correct word choice
that
apartment
in early
morning. Add an article
the early
Therefore
, car
parking issue Correct article usage
the car
is
Verb problem
has
extreme
Change the adjective
extremely
effected
Correct your spelling
affected
to
my life. It makes me late working and stress so much.
Change preposition
apply
May
you arrange a specific parking lot for me? It is better that it is assigned at the rear of my house. If not, please Verb problem
Could
dispose
a new area which is near Add the preposition
dispose of
street
.
I hope you Correct article usage
the street
would
give me a suitable solution.
Please do not hesitate to contact me.
Best regards,
Bui Thanh TungWrong verb form
will
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear and separate idea to improve overall logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and sign-offs for formal letters. 'Good morning' is typically not used in written correspondence, and the closing could be more formal.
task achievement
Include more detail about how the situation affects your life for a more complete response.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter, avoiding overly casual language or abbreviations.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.