The line chart shows average attendance at the cinema among various age groups in the US from 2000 to 2011

The line chart shows average attendance at the cinema among various age groups in the US from 2000 to 2011
The line graph provides information about the average
attendance
at cinema among various
age
groups in the United America from 2000 to 2011.
Overall
, the trend of average
attendance
increased from 2000 to 2010. The
age
group
15-24 experienced a significant
increase
, meanwhile, the
age
group
of 35 and over showed the least
increase
. The average
attendance
for the 15-24
age
category increased gradually from 15% to 32% between 2000 and 2004,
then
fluctuated from 2006 (45%) to 2011 (52%). And reached a peak of 58% between 2010 and 2011. Meanwhile, in the 7-14
age
category, the average
attendance
fluctuated from 2000 (10%) to 2005 (15%), and rose rapidly from 15% in 2005 to 30% in 2008.
This
group
reached the same value of 15% as the
age
of 25-35. The 25-35
age
category experienced a gradual
increase
from 5% in 2000 to almost 30% in 2008, reaching its peak at 38% in 2010. In more detail, the
age
group
35 and over showed a stable
increase
during the given period from 2% in 2000 to 15% in 2011.
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