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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The outline below illustrates how electricity is generated by utilizing geothermal energy.
Overall
, the diagram consists of five crucial stages. It starts
from
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storage
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 of cold
water
to
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 the generator, which will powered by
turbine
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the turbine
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 and
produse
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produce
 electricity. The whole diagram is a cyclic process. In the first stage, a certain amount of
water
 has been stored and
then
 the cold
water
 will pumped down underground through a pile as much as 4.5 km.
Next,
the cold
water
 will be injected
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 the geothermal zone through
thr
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the
 injection well and the cold
water
 will be exposed to hot rocks and its temperature will rise up and reach the production well. In the third
stege
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stage
, the hot
water
 will be pumped up through a pile, which is connected to the condenser and the
water
 will boil in the condenser. In the consequent stage, the condenser
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 full of hot steam and the steam will pass through the turbine
that is
 powered by steam and makes it rotate.
In addition
, the movement of the
turbin
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turbine
 gives
poer
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power
 to the generator and ultimately it produces electricity.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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