The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the monthly
change
trend of the prices of Use synonyms
Copper
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Nickel
, and Use synonyms
Zinc
during 2014 on average. Use synonyms
Overall
, all three metals have a fluctuating Linking Words
price
on average during 2014. The lowest trend of average Use synonyms
price
is Use synonyms
Nickel
, and the stable side is Use synonyms
Copper
.
During 2014 Use synonyms
Nickel
is a metal stuff that has an unstable average Use synonyms
price
and has the lowest trend compare with Use synonyms
Copper
and Use synonyms
Zinc
. Use synonyms
Nickel
’s Use synonyms
price
on average starts at 6% and in 3 months straightly down to 1%. The Use synonyms
price
was stable until May, but it was down to the lowest level at -3%. In the next month, the condition was better. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
price
level is still the lowest Use synonyms
at the
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end
at 1%.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
Zinc
has fluctuated. The Use synonyms
change
of Use synonyms
price
is rise from 1% to 3% in the first. Use synonyms
However
, the situation was slightly down until June. The condition goes to a stable position in 3 months at 1% from July to September, but in the next month the Linking Words
price
fluctuates and peaks at the first position Use synonyms
at the
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end
at 2%.
Use synonyms
Copper
has a better Use synonyms
change
in Use synonyms
price
compared with Use synonyms
Nickel
and Use synonyms
Zinc
. Use synonyms
Copper
’s Use synonyms
change
Use synonyms
price
is more stable than others. Use synonyms
Copper
had started at 2% and slightly down to under 0% in June. The condition was up to 1% and stayed for 3 months until September. The Use synonyms
price
was down to under 1%, but in the Use synonyms
end
was up to 1,5%.
The percentage of Use synonyms
change
in Use synonyms
price
for 3 metals has fluctuated but the Use synonyms
price
was stable Use synonyms
in
July until September. In the Change preposition
from
end
, Use synonyms
Zinc
was raised in the first position at 2%, Use synonyms
Copper
was second at 1,5%, and Use synonyms
Nickel
was third at 1%.Use synonyms
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