The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the monthly
change
trend of the prices of
Copper
,
Nickel
, and
Zinc
during 2014 on average.
Overall
, all three metals have a fluctuating
price
on average during 2014. The lowest trend of average
price
is
Nickel
, and the stable side is
Copper
. During 2014
Nickel
is a metal stuff that has an unstable average
price
and has the lowest trend compare with
Copper
and
Zinc
.
Nickel
’s
price
on average starts at 6% and in 3 months straightly down to 1%. The
price
was stable until May, but it was down to the lowest level at -3%. In the next month, the condition was better.
However
, the
price
level is still the lowest
at the
end
at 1%.
On the other hand
,
Zinc
has fluctuated. The
change
of
price
is rise from 1% to 3% in the first.
However
, the situation was slightly down until June. The condition goes to a stable position in 3 months at 1% from July to September, but in the next month the
price
fluctuates and peaks at the first position
at the
end
at 2%.
Copper
has a better
change
in
price
compared with
Nickel
and
Zinc
.
Copper
’s
change
price
is more stable than others.
Copper
had started at 2% and slightly down to under 0% in June. The condition was up to 1% and stayed for 3 months until September. The
price
was down to under 1%, but in the
end
was up to 1,5%. The percentage of
change
in
price
for 3 metals has fluctuated but the
price
was stable
in
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from
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July until September. In the
end
,
Zinc
was raised in the first position at 2%,
Copper
was second at 1,5%, and
Nickel
was third at 1%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words change, copper, nickel, zinc, price, end with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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