The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The given map illustrates
two
possible locations in Paris where a company have a plan to make a restaurant
. Overall
, it can be seen that location
one is predicted to be in the top left corner of the map while
the second location
will be located beside the Eiffel Tower which is hosted by more tourists.
Looking at more detail, the first location
will be on the northwest side of the map just to the left of the park. The Maritime Museum above this
location
will be visited by 8000 visitors each day. They are likely to visit this
restaurant
as well to have meals. The distance to access various public centres will be possible via two
brides in two
different parts of the area.
In order to the second location
of a new restaurant
, its view will be far more eye-catching than the first one. The river seine to the south of this
restaurant
as well as
The Eiffel Tower on the left side make this
location
unique. In addition
, sports
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this
location
will attract more customers. Also
, this
mentioned tower is visited by 16000 tourists each day which is a significant factor in fostering the profit via them in location
two
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