The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the
overall
amount of produced
milk
in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010, particularly in four countries; the
Nethrlands
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Netherlands
, Australia,
Tanazania
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Tanzania
and Guatemala.
Overall
, during the three decades, the Netherlands ranked as the highest nation in producing milky products,
while
Guatemala recorded the lowest
proprotions
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proportion
proportions
of these products.
It is clear that
the
Nethrelands'
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Netherlands'
rated
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rate
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remained steady with more than 11 million
litres
of
milk
annually in the three years. The second most dairy-producing nation was Australia, by milking more than 11 million
litres
in both years; 1990 and 2000,
however
, a
sligh
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slight
decrease
occured
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occurred
in the net dairy outcomes in 2010 producing 9,165,00
litres
of
milk
. When it comes to Tanzania's figures, it
significanlty
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significantly
grew from 87
thousands
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liters in 1990 to more than one million
litres
in 2000,
then
the country achieved a peak of 1,55,000 in 2010. Guatemala's experience in
milk
production
doubles
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its
growuth
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growth
between 1990 and 2000, as it rose from 26,000
litres
to 55,000,
then
the production levels
also
increased reaching
to
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84,000
litres
in 2010.
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