The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure illustrates the
overall
amount of produced milk
in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010, particularly in four countries; the Nethrlands
, Australia, Correct your spelling
Netherlands
Tanazania
and Guatemala.
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Tanzania
Overall
, during the three decades, the Netherlands ranked as the highest nation in producing milky products, while
Guatemala recorded the lowest proprotions
of these products.
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proportion
proportions
It is clear that
the Nethrelands'
Correct your spelling
Netherlands'
rated
remained steady with more than 11 million Replace the word
rate
litres
of milk
annually in the three years. The second most dairy-producing nation was Australia, by milking more than 11 million litres
in both years; 1990 and 2000, however
, a sligh
decrease Correct your spelling
slight
occured
in the net dairy outcomes in 2010 producing 9,165,00 Correct your spelling
occurred
litres
of milk
.
When it comes to Tanzania's figures, it significanlty
grew from 87 Correct your spelling
significantly
thousands
liters in 1990 to more than one million Change to singular
thousand
litres
in 2000, then
the country achieved a peak of 1,55,000 in 2010.
Guatemala's experience in milk
production doubles
its Wrong verb form
doubled
growuth
between 1990 and 2000, as it rose from 26,000 Correct your spelling
growth
litres
to 55,000, then
the production levels also
increased reaching to
84,000 Change preposition
apply
litres
in 2010.Submitted by makahlehaseel on
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