The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart demonstrates the passenger
cars
manufactured in 2015 in 7 regions of the world in percentage. In general, Greater China and Europe were the most significant passenger car producers
while
the Middle East/ Africa contributed the fewest number of
cars
. It is apparently evident from the chart that China and Europe were the largest contributors of passenger
cars
in 2015, accounting for 26% and 25% of the total car manufacture, respectively. Another major area regarding making
cars
was North America, with almost
one fifth
Add a hyphen
one-fifth
show examples
of
cars
(19%) coming from countries in
this
part of the world. Countries in South Asia, South America and the Middle East or Africa made the fewest
cars
in 2015, with their percentages taking up less than a tenth of the total production. Noticeably, the figure for
cars
made in the Middle East/ Africa was far less significant than the rest of the chart, making up only 2% of the total contribution.
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