The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in the US from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in the US from 1983 to 2003.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These pie charts illustrate various fuels that could produce electricity in the USA over 20 years.
Overall
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,
while
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most of the fossil fuels witnessed a downward trend except coal, the opposite could be seen in renewable
energy
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. Noticeably, hydropower was the less favourable choice. In traditional
energy
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, accounting for 42%, the percentage of
energy
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generated by oil was the highest in 1983, followed by coal and natural gas with 23% and 11% respectively.
This
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figure decreased moderately by 3% for 2 decades which was the most used
energy
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in 2003.
Similarly
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, the growth from 11% to 21%, witnessed by natural gas, made it become the second most used traditional
energy
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.
In contrast
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, a decrease of 10% was seen in coal from 1983 and 2003.
On the other hand
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, in 1983, among renewable
energy
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,
while
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hydropower only consisted of 4% of ways to generate electricity, which was the lowest, the other
energy
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, nuclear power, grew by 4% in the
last
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observed period. Strikingly, hydropower remained stable at 4% over 20 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy production
  • proportions
  • significance
  • notable increases
  • decreases
  • consistencies
  • emphasize
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • trends
  • emerging patterns
  • shifts
  • decline
  • rise
  • percentage
  • renewable sources
  • non-renewable sources
  • comparative analysis
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