The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart presents the
number
of crimes (Burglary, Car Theft, and Robbery) reported in New Port city center
between 2003 and 2012.
Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, both Burglary and Car Theft experienced a decline in the number
of crimes by the end of the period
while
on the other side, Robbery was more constant and there was no significant change in the number
of incidents
.
Burglary started as the highest illegal act in 2003 at just below 3500 incidents
and peaked in 2004 at about 3600 before it fell significantly and dipped in 2008, then
it fluctuated until the end of the period
staying at 1300 incidents
in 2012. Car theft began at nearly 2700 events and increased a little until 2005 before it plunged to approximately 2100 in 2006, After 2006, it experienced a fluctuation before it grew up until 2010 and fell again for the next two years reaching about 2400 incidents
in 2012.
Robbery, on the other side, is written as the lowest number
of crimes between 2003 and 2012. Started at about 600 in 2003, the number
constantly went up and down for two years period
. But the number
remained constant on
Change preposition
in
range
Correct article usage
the range
500
to 1000 Change preposition
of 500
incidents
over the period
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