the diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates how
pineapples
grow and the process of producing many products made from
this
type of fruit.
Overall
,
this
process includes both natural and man-made elements which can be divided into two main stages: the farming of
pineapples
and the processing of the crop, which produces beverages, canned food and raw
pineapples
for export.
To begin
with,
pineapples
are grown in the field with their crowns spaced 26cm apart and under
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
temperature
Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
show examples
from 23 to 30 degrees Celsius. After 7 months, ethylene is a liquid sprayed on the pineapple farm.
Finally
, the full-grown
pineapples
can be harvested after the next five months, when the fruit should be 30 centimetres high and 2 kilograms in weight. Turning to the processing stage, once collected,
pineapples
are cleaned with water prior to being graded
according to
their sizes.
Firstly
, the smallest are removed from their tops and their rinds,
then
pressured in an extractor machine to make pineapple juice. Next is the middle size which is
also
cut by the crowds and their rinds peeled, but the difference from the smallest is that they are cut into slides or smaller chunks, both of which are
subsequently
canned.
In contrast
, the biggest
pineapples
are simply coated in wax and placed in crates ready for export.
Submitted by phuonglinhlp.0900 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapples with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: