The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015

The chart illustrates the worldwide request for distinctive material strands throughout the period from 1980 to 2015. Looking from an

overall

perspective, It is readily apparent that, except wool

item

Fix the agreement mistake

items

show examples

other materials witnessed an upward trend during the given 35 years.

Moreover

polyester

got the first rank with the highest number in comparison with other staff. From the given graph it can be seen that the request for

polyester

in 1980 was about 5

million

tons

this

number climbed considerably to almost 20 (

million

tons

) in 1995 which was the same amount for cotton needs at the same time

then

it rocketed to nearly 70 (

million

tons

) by the year of 2015. whilst cotton request in 1980 was around 15

million

tons

which was bigger mount than

polyester

at first but it rose gradually until

this

amount reached about 20

million

tons

in 1995 same as

polyester

however

it experienced a fluctuation during the following 10 years after that it rose moderately to just over 30

million

tons

in 2015.

On the other hand

, the need for cellulosic material remained unchanged from 1980 to nearly 1999 but after that, it started to grow slightly to about 10

million

tons

in 2015.

Although

the requested amount of wool stayed stable like cellulosic, in the year 1999 it started to fall slightly to about less than 0.5

million

tons

in 2015.

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