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The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015

The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015
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The chart illustrates the worldwide request for distinctive material strands throughout the period from 1980 to 2015. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, It is readily apparent that, except wool
item
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items
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 other materials witnessed an upward trend during the given 35 years.
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,
polyester
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 got the first rank with the highest number in comparison with other staff. From the given graph it can be seen that the request for
polyester
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 in 1980 was about 5
million
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tons
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 number climbed considerably to almost 20 (
million
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tons
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) in 1995 which was the same amount for cotton needs at the same time
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 it rocketed to nearly 70 (
million
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tons
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) by the year of 2015. whilst cotton request in 1980 was around 15
million
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tons
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 which was bigger mount than
polyester
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 at first but it rose gradually until
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 amount reached about 20
million
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tons
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 in 1995 same as
polyester
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 it experienced a fluctuation during the following 10 years after that it rose moderately to just over 30
million
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tons
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 in 2015.
On the other hand
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, the need for cellulosic material remained unchanged from 1980 to nearly 1999 but after that, it started to grow slightly to about 10
million
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tons
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 in 2015.
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 the requested amount of wool stayed stable like cellulosic, in the year 1999 it started to fall slightly to about less than 0.5
million
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tons
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 in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words polyester, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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