some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibilty to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many individuals argue that
manufactures
and shopping malls should Correct your spelling
manufacturers
purches
little Correct your spelling
purchase
purchases
plastic
packaged items; whereas
other
consider that Fix the agreement mistake
others
society
have
the responsibility to buy products with less Change the verb form
has
plastic
packaging. Overall
, this
essay will provide my opinion about Correct article usage
the prons
prons
and cons Correct your spelling
pros
using
Change preposition
of using
produsts
packaging in Correct your spelling
products
product
the
public areas Correct article usage
apply
such
the
behaviour of using Change preposition
as the
plastic
.
Advocate for using plastic
in public area
for Fix the agreement mistake
areas
seller
, there are several impacts. Fix the agreement mistake
sellers
Firtsly
, if Correct your spelling
Firstly
incereasing
people who Correct your spelling
increasing
interesting
using
Wrong verb form
use
plastic
after buying someting
in Correct your spelling
something
manufacture
will rise significantly Wrong verb form
manufacturing
of
waste Change preposition
in
plastict
. Correct your spelling
plastic
plastics
However
, the goverment
should collaborate with some Correct your spelling
government
stakeholder
Fix the agreement mistake
stakeholders
for making
Change preposition
to make
activity
Fix the agreement mistake
activities
for reducing
rubbish Change preposition
to reduce
such
as doing Add an article
the campaign
a campaign
campaign
. Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
Secondly
, the management of manufactures
and shopping Correct your spelling
manufacturers
mall
to Fix the agreement mistake
malls
making
Wrong verb form
make
regulation
with Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
Correct article usage
the collage
collage
Correct your spelling
college
such
as reseller encoraged
Verb problem
encouraging
consumen
to Correct your spelling
consumers
using
Wrong verb form
use
handbag
when selling in area Fix the agreement mistake
handbags
mall
. Fix the agreement mistake
malls
Furthermore
, the impact of the regulation
will decline
Verb problem
decrease
society
Change noun form
society's
using
Wrong verb form
use of
plastic
packaging.
Lastly
, making regulation
about panisment
for Correct your spelling
punishment
society
waste rubbish in public
area. Add an article
a public
the public
Moreover
, it will reduce behaviour
of waste rubbish.
Add an article
the behaviour
On the other hand
, behaviour
of using Add an article
the behaviour
plastic
bag
for Fix the agreement mistake
bags
consument
Correct your spelling
consumption
are
improving knowledge of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
impact
Correct article usage
the impact
over
taking Change preposition
of
plactic
. Correct your spelling
plastic
In contrast
, lowesly
of education and Replace the word
low levels
knowlegde
of reducing Correct your spelling
knowledge
plactic
Correct your spelling
plastic
product
are making people less care about Fix the agreement mistake
products
environment
. Add an article
the environment
For example
, the kompas news
found that the level of recycling Correct your spelling
Kompas News
plastic
product
in Fix the agreement mistake
products
Correct article usage
the bigest
bigest
city Change the word
biggest
decline
significantly from 2022 to 2023 Wrong verb form
declined
due to
the goverment
Correct your spelling
government
upsupport
Correct your spelling
up support
support
the
Change preposition
of the
requipment
for recycling Correct your spelling
equipment
requirement
plastic
.
In conlusion
, Correct your spelling
conclusion
the
Correct article usage
apply
manufactures
and shopping malls sell Correct your spelling
manufacturers
fewer
Correct quantifier usage
less
plastic
due to
the buyer and seller
are less Fix the agreement mistake
sellers
knowlegde
Correct your spelling
knowledge
of
using Change preposition
about
plactic
and impacting for Correct your spelling
plastic
envoirement
. Correct your spelling
environment
Moreover
. some stakeholder
should Fix the agreement mistake
stakeholders
collaborete
Correct your spelling
collaborate
for making
Change preposition
to make
regulation
for Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
society
.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Achievement
To improve Task Achievement, ensure that you fully address all parts of the task. Your response must provide a clear discussion of both views and state your own opinion. Try to develop each point with a clear, focused argument, supported by specific examples or evidence.
Coherence & Cohesion
For better Coherence and Cohesion, work on organizing your ideas more logically and clearly. Use a range of cohesive devices effectively (e.g., conjunctions, lexical phrases) to connect sentences and paragraphs, and structure your essay into clear paragraphs (introduction, body, conclusion). Pay attention to paragraphing, as this will enhance the readability and flow of your essay.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!