Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,

environment

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environmental

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problems

such

as

water

and air

pollution

are

a

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significant

issue

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issues

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for all

people

and animal

life

. Some of the

people

concern

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about

this

trouble

whereas

others do not

worn

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it.

However

, especially

water

and

watery

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water

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resource

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resources

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have a considerable impact

in

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on

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our

life

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lives

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. I

aware

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am aware

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of

water

pollution

and will explain my perspective with more detail and some examples. First and foremost,

nature

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natural

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resources play

significant

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a significant

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role in all biogeography. Most of the

people

do not have consciousness and especially they can throw away their rubbish in

water

or anywhere. The

garbages

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garbage

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which thrown into the

water

adversly

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adversely

affects the

life

of aquatic organisms. Particularly, in order to

wastes

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in

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watery resources

such

as seas, oceans and lakes absorb by fishes in

this

case these fishes

conclude

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consume

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intensive heavy

metal

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metals

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.

In addition

, societies that consume these fish are affected by heavy metals

such

as mercury, molybdenum and arsenic. These metals can cause cancer when consumed for a long time.

For example

,

according to

WHO (World Health Organization), it has been determined that the death rate

due to

heavy metals in the world is on average 1 million per year.

Secondly

, the major cause of

water

pollution

is industrial and agricultural activities. Industries often release toxic chemicals and

polllutants

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pollutants

into

water

and

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leading to contamination.

Similarly

, agricultural practices

include

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the

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fertilizers, pesticides and herbicides contribute to

pollution

.

For instance

, the discharge of industrial wastewater containing some harmful chemicals

such

as

,

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rock oil, asbestos and cyanide into rivers can have devastating effects on aquatic

life

and pose serious health risks to human and animal populations.

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Animals

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Animal

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Animals

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that

drink

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drinks

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these untreated waters are found dead on the lakesides, sometimes millions of them a year. In conclusion,

water

pollution

is a growing problem caused by industrial, agricultural activities and inorganic waste by

thrown

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people

, inadequate waste management.

However

, with some regulations and improved waste

managaement

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management

systems, we can prevent

water

pollution

and protect our

water

recources

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resources

.