The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The graph provided,
give
information about the average monthly percentage change Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
price
of metals such
as copper
, nickel
and zinc throughout 2014.
By
average, Change preposition
On
nickel
price
continue to decline from January to Fix the agreement mistake
prices
June
2014. The steepest drop of
Change preposition
in
nickel
price
happened in the month of May from 0,5% to -3% on June
2014. Afterwards, nickel
Correct article usage
the nickel
price
rise
in July 2014 and Replace the word
rose
continue
to show Wrong verb form
continued
its
stable growth until Correct pronoun usage
apply
September
2014. Nickel
price
surge
from October to November.
As for, Wrong verb form
surged
copper
price
gradually falls from January to May. Copper
price
rise
from Replace the word
rose
June
to July, afterwards
Correct word choice
but afterwards
price
of copper
doesn't show any change until September
2014.
Zinc price
is the only metal price
that shows a hike from January to February, but after that zinc price
move
Correct subject-verb agreement
moves
in
a decelerate pace from February to Change preposition
at
June
. It only shows little
Add an article
a little
the little
rise
in July and continue
to move Correct subject-verb agreement
continues
in
a stable pace until Change preposition
at
September
.
We can conclude that the movement of prices from June
until September
significantly move
Wrong verb form
moved
in
Change preposition
at
a
same pace, Correct article usage
the
whereas
the price
first rise
in Replace the word
rose
June
to July and doesn't
show any change until Wrong verb form
didn't
September
2014.Submitted by indyynaila on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, nickel, june, rise, september with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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