The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

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The pie charts compare the categories involved in the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Overall

, it is evident that

although

agriculture allocated almost a quarter of the contribution in 2000, it decreased significantly in 2016.

In addition

, the diversity between groups was higher in 2000 and it became more similar ranging between 8 to 17% in 2016.

According to

the graph for the year 2000, agriculture, leisure, health care, and education were the greatest amount of contribution with 24%, 17%, and 17%, respectively.

Additionally

, transportation and government expenditures took about a third of the costs. Eventually, construction and finance shared only 3 versus 5 per cent of money involvement.

On the other hand

, healthcare and education went to the first rank with 17% in 2016. Except for government and finance, all remaining categories were almost between 10 to 16%. Obviously, construction services with a 7% increase, reached 10%.

Also

, agriculture experienced the highest fall with 10% in 2016.

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