The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
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The pie charts compare the categories involved in the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
Overall
, it is evident that
although
agriculture allocated almost a quarter of the contribution in 2000, it decreased significantly in 2016.
In addition
, the diversity between groups was higher in 2000 and it became more similar ranging between 8 to 17% in 2016.
According to
the graph for the year 2000, agriculture, leisure, health care, and education were the greatest amount of contribution with 24%, 17%, and 17%, respectively.
Additionally
, transportation and government expenditures took about a third of the costs. Eventually, construction and finance shared only 3 versus 5 per cent of money involvement.
On the other hand
, healthcare and education went to the first rank with 17% in 2016. Except for government and finance, all remaining categories were almost between 10 to 16%. Obviously, construction services with a 7% increase, reached 10%.
Also
, agriculture experienced the highest fall with 10% in 2016.
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