The chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day, and also the average price of their tickets.

The chart below shows the number of passengers arriving at a train station per hour across a day, and also the average price of their tickets.
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The table reveals the number of arrival people at a train
station
every two hours for a day.
Besides
, it
also
shows the average cost of their tickets.
Overall
, the vast majority of
passengers
came to the train
station
at 12:00
p
.
m
., whilst the figure for
passengers
who arrived at the
station
at 4:00
p
.
m
. was the least.
According to
the information show in the table, it can be apparently seen that there were 200 people arrived at the
station
at 12:00
p
.
m
., which was the most crowded time in one day and the average price of
passengers
tickets was 31. After 4 hours, the number of
passengers
dived to 230 which was around 3 times lower than that of
passengers
at 12:00p.
m
.
Moreover
, it grew almost 3 times from 4:00
p
.
m
. to 6:00
p
.
m
. by the number of 690 which the average ticket price was 11. What should be particularly mentioned is that there was a 50% reduction from 12 :00
p
.
m
. to 2:00
p
.
m
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words station, passengers, p, m with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • number of passengers
  • arriving
  • train station
  • per hour
  • throughout the day
  • average ticket price
  • progressively increases
  • mid-afternoon
  • gradually decreases
  • peak
  • approximately
  • early morning
  • late evening
  • lowest
  • averaging
  • slight fluctuation
  • highest average price
  • observed
  • mid-morning
  • fluctuation
  • not significant
  • difference
  • relatively small
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