The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map reveals
two
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sites
for a new supermarket (s) which is planned for the town, Garlsdon.
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Overall
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two
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sites
were far from each other since one was in the centre of the town and the other was in the countryside.
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According to
the information shown on the map, it can be apparently seen that both Linking Words
sites
were near the railway. Use synonyms
Besides
, industrial areas are closer to the Linking Words
two
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sites
than housing areas. Use synonyms
Moreover
, S1 was 12 km away from Hindon where the population was 10,000 . Linking Words
On the other hand
, S2 was 16km to Brangdon which had 15,000 citizens and 25 km to Crandon which had 29,000 citizens. What should be particularly mentioned is that the town centre was a no traffic zone and the population of Garlsdon was 65000 which was above 6 times that of Hindon.
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To sum up
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two
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sites
will bring benefits to different regions of people.Use synonyms
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