Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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governments

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should spend their budget wisely in order to bring benefits

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the country.

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the authorities' spending on

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expedition

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is considered as

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unnecessary

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. Even though a

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exploration

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will be a breakthrough,

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governments

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should prioritize other primary things like food and housing.

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essay will explain my view.

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, a

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expedition

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is categorized as an advanced technology

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that will require lots of money.

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will affect the

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budget allocation as they will inject more cash into

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program

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, the cash that would be injected into

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will disturb other programs'

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,

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are more important.

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, the people will become the victims as they are not going to receive complete services from the government officials.

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should prioritize the security of the nation rather than doing an advanced science

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. Historically, an advanced technology initiative might cause

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political tension between nations.

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, the

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should check the

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aspects of the project in order to convince other countries that

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project will not be a preparation for

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war.

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it will not be a problem if the

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governments

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declare it as a national research

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. In conclusion, a

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expedition

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would require lots of capital as it would not be beneficial for

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national development. As many nations have limited allocation that could limit the policy for other sectors and

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might start political problems for the nations.

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, it is better to distribute the capital

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people-focused

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program

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than

technology-focused

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