The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.

The chart illustrates the total minutes that the British use telephone call between 1995 to 2002 in three types including Local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles.
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The bar graph delineates the number of time
ultilized
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utilized
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by people in three various calls from 1995 to 2002. In general, it is
conspicious
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conspicuous
that even though the local fixed line is the most popular among others, there was no difference
of
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in
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it's
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customers between the beginning and the ending time.
In contrast
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, the two rest of categories
experieced
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experienced
an increase
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their users. Turning to the local fixed line, it commenced just across 70,
then
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rose gradually and reached a climax point at 90 in 1999.
However
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, in the next observed period, the consumed time declined fractionally by a fifth and ended at the same level as the beginning. As regards the other categories, there was a significant rise in the national and international fixed line
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starting at well above 30 and
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a peak at around 60.
Likewise
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, the
mobilephone
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mobile phone
utilizers have risen fractionally for the first three years, after that it skyrocketed between 1998 to 2000 and touched the highest point at around 40.
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