The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph demonstrates variations in the average quantity of CO2 released by individuals in four nations, namely the United Kingdom,
Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal, over a Correct your spelling
period
periof
of four decades (1967-2007)
Correct your spelling
period
Firstly
, We can analyse Portugal and Italy, in Portugal, CO2 emission was only 1.5 tonnes
at the beginning of the period, However
, there was an increase to a high of roughly five metric tonnes
at the end
of the period. Similarly
, Italy emitted 4.5 tonnes
of gas in 1967 and roughly 7.5 tonnes
in 2007.
Furthermore
, The United Kingdom and Sweden
, both countries saw their carbon dioxide emissions
decrease, mainly the UK, where emissions
fell from approximately 11 metric tonnes
per year to 9 million metric tonnes
in 2007. In the case of Sweden
, emissions
increased from 8 to 11 million metric tonnes
at the start of the time period then
decreased abruptly thus
it intersected with Portugal the 5 tonnes
.
Overall
, emissions
rose in Italy and Portugal, Nonetheless
, they maintained a downtrend in the United Kingdom and Sweden
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