IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#carbon #dioxide #co #emissions #person #kingdom #sweden #berween #summarise #information #features #comparisons
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The presented line graph delineates the changes in
a
Correct article usage
the
show examples
 proportion of CO2
emissions
Use synonyms
 in four countries,namely the United Kingdom, Italy, Portugal and
Sweden
Use synonyms
 a period of four decades (1967-2007). At first glance, we analyse that clearly the land with the highest
emissions
Use synonyms
 in metric
tonnes
Use synonyms
 every year is the UK.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, Portugal and
Sweden
Use synonyms
 intersected into 5 and it is these proportions that made their positions the lowest level in 2007. It is explicitly observed that changes in Portugal and Italy are almost steady.In 1967 , Portugal had the
least
Correct word choice
lowest
show examples
 percentage with roughly 1.5
tonnes
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
 the United Kingdom preserved the
utmost
Correct word choice
highest
show examples
 position with 11
tonnes
Use synonyms
,
however
Linking Words
, after the following years, it caught a downward tendency mildly.
Likewise
Linking Words
,
Sweden
Use synonyms
's
emissions
Use synonyms
 rates went down abruptly from 1977 to 2007.
Therefore
Linking Words
, Italy and
Sweden
Use synonyms
 met 7 CO2
emissions
Use synonyms
 in 1987.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, a part of Italy between 1997 and 2007 remained stable at 7.5
tonnes
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by ezgi.maide.213 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: