You are not satisfied with many problems and with the changing room in a Sports Centre that you visit. Write a letter to the Sports Centre manager. In your letter Explain the problem Say how you feel about this problem What steps you would like manager to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is that there is a problem
in
changing rooms in a Change preposition
with
sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
and I want to change a little.
Yesterday, I visited Change the spelling
centre
to
your sports Remove the preposition
apply
center
. I have difficulties Change the spelling
centre
about
changing rooms because they are very small and there is a lack of Change preposition
with
space
as well
This
is uncomfortable
situation and it makes me sad. When I opened the changing Add an article
an uncomfortable
rooms
door, I saw the ugly Change the noun form
room
space
. If you are space
of me, you like it.
You need to expand the space
of the changing room and buy a lot of shelves to put clothes.
I hope you will understand my situation and react positively by helping Change preposition
in.
to
me.
Best regards,
Tolibova GulasalChange preposition
apply
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body paragraphs dealing with separate ideas, and a conclusion. Each paragraph should present one main idea and supporting sentences.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear, consistent structure throughout your letter to allow logical progression of ideas.
task achievement
To improve task achievement, thoroughly address all three bullet points in the task with clear, detailed explanations and specific requests or suggestions for the manager.
task achievement
Employ a polite and formal tone suitable for writing to a manager. Use appropriate salutations and closings, and consider employing phrases like 'I would suggest,' or 'Could we possibly,' to make polite requests.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite