The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

The data above illustrates the total number of people who

lives

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live

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urban

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apply

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among

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apply

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the six continents, Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, North America and Oceania.

Overall

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, the trend of living urban is increasing from the years of 1950, 2007,

2050

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and 2050

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. Almost all the population will live in

city

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the city

a city

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by the time 2050, especially in North America, the percentage hit it is peak at 90%. From the chart, we can see that Africa and Asia get the lowest percentage in 1950, 15% and 17% respectively, but the number

rise

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rose

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significant

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significantly

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in 2007 (37% and 41%).

In addition

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, their number will up above 50% in 2050.

In contrast

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, 51% of people in Europe already

lives

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lived

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urban

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in urban

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in 1950. In sum,

it is clear that

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the years

goes

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by, people tend to live in

apartment

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apartments

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that

located

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are located

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in the centre of

city

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the city

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Dec 27, 2023

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

141 words

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