The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.
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The data above illustrates the total number of people who
lives
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urban
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in
among
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the six continents, Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, North America and Oceania.
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, the trend of living urban is increasing from the years of 1950, 2007,
2050
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and 2050
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. Almost all the population will live in
city
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the city
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by the time 2050, especially in North America, the percentage hit it is peak at 90%. From the chart, we can see that Africa and Asia get the lowest percentage in 1950, 15% and 17% respectively, but the number
rise
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significant
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in 2007 (37% and 41%).
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, their number will up above 50% in 2050.
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, 51% of people in Europe already
lives
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urban
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in urban
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in 1950. In sum,
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by
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the years
goes
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by, people tend to live in
apartment
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apartments
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that
located
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are located
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in the centre of
city
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the city
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.
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