The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.
The data above illustrates the total number of people who
lives
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live
urban
in Correct word choice
apply
among
the six continents, Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, North America and Oceania.
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apply
Overall
, the trend of living urban is increasing from the years of 1950, 2007, 2050
. Almost all the population will live in Correct word choice
and 2050
city
by the time 2050, especially in North America, the percentage hit it is peak at 90%.
From the chart, we can see that Africa and Asia get the lowest percentage in 1950, 15% and 17% respectively, but the number Add an article
the city
a city
rise
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rose
significant
in 2007 (37% and 41%). Change the adjective
significantly
In addition
, their number will up above 50% in 2050. In contrast
, 51% of people in Europe already lives
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lived
urban
in 1950. In sum, Change preposition
in urban
it is clear that
by
the years Change preposition
as
goes
by, people tend to live in Correct subject-verb agreement
go
apartment
that Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
located
in the centre of Add a missing verb
are located
city
.Add an article
the city
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