The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates data about struggles that humans face when they decide to stay in different nations between ages 18 and over 55
years
.
From an overall
perspective, it is noticeable that individuals who ranged from 18 to 34 years
old faced a lot of challenges than those over 55.
On the one hand, people whose ages ranged from 18 to 34 struggle to make friends more than those whose ages ranged from 35 to over 55 with a percentage of 46. However
, humans over 55 age are facing problems to overcome learning the native language with the rate of 54.
On the other hand
, people who are more than 55 years
old and struggling with finding somewhere to live have the lowest proportion in all categories. It is lower than those who ranged from 35 to 54 years
by approximately 18 per cent.Submitted by f201600285 on
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