you have seen an advertisement for a part time job welcoming visitors to your town. Write to the recruiters. In your letter •Explain why you want the job •Describe why you would be a good person for the role •Describe any relevant experience you may have

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Dear BT manager, I am writing to apply for a

part time

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job about welcoming visitors. I would like to get

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job as follows an advertisement on the website which is suitable for my ability and interest. I strongly believe to

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have

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a good role

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this

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position by introducing our culture to new visitors.

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, I felt interested in your advertisement descriptions because I like to meet and communicate with a group of people, especially visitors.

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, I am a freelancer working for

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homeless non-profit community and I think I could meet your time requirements for

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role and

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to have

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outing

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if needed.

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, I have earned a certificate of tour guide in the short term for The Mekong Delta culture which

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me to

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introduce our traditional local effectively.

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, I used to contact and make

the

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connections between people for my current job so I think these are relevant to the person

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you seeking

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. I am looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Yours faithfully My My

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task achievement

Make sure to address all parts of the prompt clearly, with an explicit connection to the job and your desire to hold it.

coherence cohesion

Create a logical flow throughout the letter, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs dedicated to each point, and a formal closing.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

178 words

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