The given chart illustrates the percentage of four different recycled materials between 1982 and 2010 in a country.

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The chart demonstrates the percentage of four different recycled materials: paper &

carboard

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cardboard

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, glass containers, aluminium cans, plastics from 1982 till 2010.

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the line graph, all that period the most popular recycled material was paper and cardboard, meanwhile

less

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fewer

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reused

product

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products

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Wrong verb form

were

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plastics.

This

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chart provides strong evidence, that in 1982 65% of paper was recycled, till 1986 its figure climbed slightly to 70%.

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, by 1990 it had declined to the same percentage as in 1982,

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, between 1986 and 1994 it recovered (80%) and reached its peak. From 1998 till 2010 its rate dropped steadily to 70%.

Meanwhile

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glass stood at 50% in 1982, but following 8 years its number fell to 40%.

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, between 1990 and 2010 its rate started to improve and hit a high of 60%. In comparison,

aliminium

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aluminium

cans

was

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were

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started to reprocess in 1986 and at that time its percentage was about 5% and till 2010 its figure shot up to 45%.

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While plastics

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Plastics

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, which people started to recycle in 1990, stood at about 3% in the same year and till 2010 there was

gentle

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a gentle

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rise to almost 10%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

187 words

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