The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts above illustrate the method people used to travel to a university in 2 years 2004 and 2009.
Overall
,
while
the number of people using public vehicles increased, the opposite was seen in private transport. In the private transport category, accounting for 51%, the percentage of car users was the highest, followed by bicycle and walking with 9% and 4% respectively.
This
figure sharply decreased by 23% for over half a decade which made
this
mean of transport take up one-quarter in 2009.
In contrast
, increases of 2% and 7% were seen in both individuals who
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walking and cycling between 2004 and 2009. ‘ Among public ones,
while
only 3% of students chose trains as a way to travel, which was the lowest, 48% lower than the most popular, people who commuted by buses took up 33%.
Although
there was a significant growth in bus commuters, from 33% to 46%, which made
this
type become the most popular, the other public vehicle just exhibited a moderate rise of 1% after 5 year
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