Poverty is a common problem in the world that
brings
Verb problem
apply
effects
Correct your spelling
affects
to
many Change preposition
apply
children
. In my opinion, it has negative impacts on society and the best solution to overcome Use synonyms
this
trouble is to give free education.
In Linking Words
this
modern society, poverty is a challenging problem that gives adults including offspring negative effects Linking Words
such
as problems to purchase healthy Linking Words
foodfood
. Many of them prefer to buy cheap Correct your spelling
food
not healthy
Rephrase
unhealthy
food
rather than buying healthy meals that are expensive. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it can affect their Linking Words
bodies
about how it would be grow. Use synonyms
For instance
, stunting is a problem in Indonesia since it shows how bad the growing Linking Words
bodies
of Use synonyms
children
Use synonyms
.
Most of their parents bring them instant Add a missing verb
are.
food
which is bad for their Use synonyms
bodies
. Use synonyms
As a result
, their Linking Words
bodies
may get ill easily since it's not healthy and safe.
The case Use synonyms
need
to be stopped by making a rule from governments. The rule requires governments to allocate free healthy foods for offspring at schools. I heard Change the verb form
needs
this
rule from a president in an Asian country. Linking Words
For example
, not every Linking Words
Use synonyms
children
can bring Change to a singular noun
child
food
to school but Use synonyms
with
Change preposition
apply
this
action Linking Words
which
provides healthy cooking for students. Meals can be changed from fried chicken at home to green vegetables at school. Not only Correct pronoun usage
apply
its
help Correct your spelling
does it
children
but Use synonyms
also
helps their parents to not much worry about their Linking Words
food
.
In conclusion, poverty is an inevitable issue that brings disadvantages for people in the world. One of the solutions that can be done is doing a restriction from governments.Use synonyms
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