The maps show the outskirts of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures represent various changes that took place in the suburban area of Fosburg between 1980 and 2015. Generally speaking, the 35-year period shows the 35-year period saw development in the road layout and in the residential, recreational and commercial facilities.
First of all, we can easily recognize that after that much time, there is a new roundabout in the middle of the plan. With the community services, there are 2 new car parks and a supermarket, which replaced the terraced houses.
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, the 2 tennis courts got developed into a whole new sports centre.
On top of that, the old park was relocated to a nearby land, and there are new terraced houses in that area. Linking Words
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but not least, the warehouses in the left corner of the map have been built from tree-surrounded fields.
To summarise, Fosbury’s outskirt area has had many changes over a few decades, mostly about the recreational and commercial features.Linking Words
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