The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the rate of different age groups in the
years
2000 and 2050 in two various countries Yemen and Italy.
Overall
, it is noticeable that adults who are 15-59
years
old
people contain
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the majority of others, except Yemen's population in 2000.
To begin
, as can be seen from the figure, one noticeable future in the data is that
people
who were 0-14
years
lived
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old lived
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in Yemen arranged half of all inhabitants in 2000,
whereas
in 2050 15-59
years
of
the
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mature will be 57.3 %.
However
, the proportion of 60+
years
older
people
will be increased slightly.
On the other hand
, looking at more details
the
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chart nearly 62% of residents were 15-59
years
old,
while
it will fall to approximately 46% in 2050 in Italy.
By contrast
, 60+
years
of
people
will be doubled from 2000 to 2050. The proportion of 0-14
years
also
decreases during a 50-year period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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