The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events

The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events
The table gives information about the reasons and percentage of adults in the UK attending the arts over the 20-year period.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the main purpose for visiting the art event was to wish to meet a particular famous person over the given period. Looking at the details, as regards the proportion of wish to see a celebrity, it was 58% twenty years ago declining slightly to 56% now. The second main
reason
for visiting the arts was to celebrate a particular event, with 27%, which is about half of that of the main
reason
.
However
, it has experienced a dramatic decline to 9% at the present time, becoming the least popular
reason
. As for the share of
reason
for spending time with children, there was a steady climb of 13% during 20 years. When it comes to going to art occasions for business purposes, the percentage of adults almost doubled, with the percentage increasing from 6% to 11% throughout the given time.
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