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The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.
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The graphic above depicts data about the number of meat marketed overseas in certain countries from 2012 to 2016. The given statistics are measured in tons.
Overall
, it is conspicuous that Brazil is leading the meat market
while
 Switzerland has fewer amount of flesh to sell abroad.
To begin
 with, in 2012, Brazil was the most significant exporter accounting for 125,465 piles. In comparison to other nations
such
 as Uruguay and Japan which have not reached 50,000 loads, stood only at 44,372 and 224 abundance, respectively.
In addition
, the remaining countries
likeNorway
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like Norway
 and Switzerland are far below those states.
However
, in 2014, the Land of The Rising Sun dramatically increased from 224 to 633 mass
likewise
 in The Land of Samba where it attained 130,307 tonnage
as well as
 The Land of The Midnight Sun accomplished 81 heaps.
On the contrary
, Swiss and Uruguay declined sharply but surely managed to climb up by the end of the period.
Moreover
, other territories
also
 enhance international trade, except for Norge.
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