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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart presents information about the household recycling rates in three countries
incluing
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including
 France,
Germany
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, and the
UK
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 from 2005 to 2015. From an
overall
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 perspective,
recycling
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the recycling
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 rate
was
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apply
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increased during the period in the
UK
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 and
Germany
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, but it
was
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decreased in France. Looking at details, the red line on the chart related to France
give
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gives
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 a
perminant
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permanent
 decline
information
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 from 50 to 30 per cent
beween
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between
 2005 and 2013,
then
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recycling
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the recycling
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 rate
growed
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grew
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 to 40 per cent over a five year-course to 2015.
According to
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 the chart,
Germany
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 and the
UK
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 rose in discussed topic from 20 to 57 and 33 to 60 per cent, respectively. The thing to point out is
Germany
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 has
gradual
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climp
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climb
 but the
UK
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 had a steady period from 2007 to 2009.
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, it can
bee
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be
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 seen that
Germany
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 had a sharper regression line than the
UK
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,
furthermore
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 its distance got closer
at the
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end point
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endpoint
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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