The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The line chart presents information about the household recycling rates in three countries

incluing

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including

France,

Germany

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, and the

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from 2005 to 2015. From an

overall

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perspective,

recycling

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the recycling

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rate

was

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apply

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increased during the period in the

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and

Germany

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, but it

was

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apply

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decreased in France. Looking at details, the red line on the chart related to France

give

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gives

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perminant

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permanent

decline

information

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in information

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from 50 to 30 per cent

beween

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between

2005 and 2013,

then

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recycling

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the recycling

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rate

growed

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grew

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to 40 per cent over a five year-course to 2015.

According to

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the chart,

Germany

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and the

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rose in discussed topic from 20 to 57 and 33 to 60 per cent, respectively. The thing to point out is

Germany

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has

gradual

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a gradual

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climp

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climb

but the

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had a steady period from 2007 to 2009.

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, it can

bee

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seen that

Germany

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had a sharper regression line than the

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furthermore

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its distance got closer

at the

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end point

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endpoint

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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, uk with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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