The chart represents data about unemployment rates in two countries
The chart represents data about unemployment rates in two countries including the US and Japan for a six-year period from March 1993 to the same month in 1999.
From an
overall
perspective, the discussed topic increased in Japan from 2.5 to 5 per cent but it declined from 7 to 5 per cent in the US.
Looking at details, both dot and line diagrams which are related to the US and Japan, respectively, not only do not show shrap
changes but Correct your spelling
shape
also
give perminant
regression information in Correct your spelling
permanent
work force
changes.
It Correct your spelling
workforce
shoud
be mentioned that some noises were during the time period, Correct your spelling
should
However
, they show steady trends. According to
the chart, the thing to point out is that both countries did not show significant different
and they had equal unemployment Replace the word
differences
rate
in the endpoint.Fix the agreement mistake
rates
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