The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates opinions of citizen's
coffee
and tea buying and drinking habits. the data was taken from five Australian cities.
Initially
, the percentage of people who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea was between 60% and 65% in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
and Hobert,
while
in
Brisbane
was 55% and in
Adelaide
was lower than in
Brisbane
by 6%.
Moreover
, the portion of the population who bought instant
coffee
in 4
last
weeks was approximately 45% in
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
and
Hobart
,
Although
in
Sydney
and
Melbourne
was lower than others by 5%. In the
last
item, it can be seen that the people of
Brisbane
and Adelia, were not willing to buy fresh
coffee
in 4
last
weeks,
while
the citizens of
Sydney
and
Melbourne
were interested in buying these goods with some percentage around 45% and
Hobart
was slightly higher than
Adelaide
by 7%. To put it in a nutshell, three of the Australian cities which named
Hobart
,
Melbourne
, and
Sydney
, went to cafes as high as other ones in the
last
4 weeks
while
a smaller percentage of the citizens who bought fresh
coffee
belongs to
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sydney, melbourne, brisbane, adelaide, hobart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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